Score: 5

"Just some criticisms"

submission: BlownOutOfProportion4 (1)

date: August 11, 2009

I'm only trying to offer constructive criticism and in no way am I trying to insult you or bash your series.
In the passed I wrote some reviews for these series which were less than nice.

If you want to be a comedy writer you need to practice more than just vulgarity. I felt you used it as a clutch through most of it, if not all of it. Don't get me wrong, you had a lot of things worth smiling at; mostly the beginning of the picture show but the obsenities and sex themes got boring quick.
You've got non-sequitor down.
The biggest problem is the plot. I couldn't find it. I know it's three parts long, but gar; I just can't do it, I can't sit through another. Is it just three kids day at school?
On the other hand:
The animation isn't professional, but the amount of work that went into it is obvious. The backgrounds weren't bad, not bad at all, and there's definately attention to detail. I'm mostly criticizing your humor.
I know your general response is "You need a sense of humor!!..." but I don't think thats it. It's just a lot of swearing with sex jokes.
But it's not all bad.

Score: 7

"What happened to his voice?!"

submission: Ingus: Episode 8

date: July 31, 2009

Well I'm a HUGE fan of Ingus. To see I'm 3 years late for an update upsets me; but, alas I caught it and I feel like Ingus is missing. It just doesn't feel the same anymore.

Score: 10

"Loved it"

submission: MAG Vent

date: July 1, 2009

I know the animation style wasn't yours but you did animate it none the less. I think this was brilliantly done. You made it worth watching (length-wise) and comedic (vent-wise).
I'm glad it wasn't just some random parts throughout the game, it actually had short story plot development.
Right on to ya mate!
Hope you make some more with some different games too.

Score: 5

"Well Mr. James Huston,"

submission: Hacker Mind (trailer)

date: July 1, 2009

It did get my attention and I'm somewhat interested in auditioning for an animation position (I'm currently working on another project with another director).
As for 2010 I say GOOD LUCK! Unless you're planning on getting a large team under you, that's quite the goal and I wish you the best.

Questions you might know now:
Very interesting, how long is it supposed to be?
Do you have an entire script or storyboard developed?
How many main characters are there?

Again mate, stay dedicated and good luck.

Score: 2

"Well I'm glad I didn't see the first one :D"

submission: Dio [Episode vi]

date: June 30, 2009

Keep practicing.
". . .NOT EVERYTHING IS ABOUT ANIMATION![mainly content ^_^]"
Well, then if you're gonna say that put in some content...it was really...hmm what's the word? Amateur.
To hold true to your own argument have it make sense. I didn't understand anything except they made a shopping list of Destiny. Maybe get a mic and do some voice acting or find someone else to do some for you. Write a script and storyboard before you animate, I just couldn't follow anything.
And yes, the animation (what little there was) was poor. If there's that little animation put more time into it.
Try again. May take you 'til 10.0 but I'm not sure maybe more.

Score: 8

"Closure is important"

submission: endino

date: June 4, 2009

If you had added just like 10 extra seconds of the guy doing an epic dino-finisher this could have been a masterpiece.
Good work though; just needs closure.
Felt like it finished too soon and left me with mouth agape.
GJ mate, GJ.

Score: 5

"I can't rate your film here"

submission: ODTPAKTP. (see inside)

date: May 2, 2009

I didn't watch your film so I'm not giving it a score. 5/10 is just in between. Pls fix your play button, for whatever reason I can't right click and play it.

Score: 6

"Not enough SPLODE!"

submission: SplodeyMan

date: February 9, 2009

I'm trigger happy :(
5 splodes took forever, kinda wish it felt more random then timed.
Was pretty cool, good time waster.

Score: 6

"It's more of a copy and paste then a tutorial"

submission: Donzy's Platform Tutorial

date: February 9, 2009

it wasn't TERRIBLE but there's a few bugs.
1. It says use the arrow keys to move but its WASD
2. I jumped off the platform and the guy just kept falling (infinite loop i assume)
It was ok, but for tutorials sake explain some of the actionscript to the viewer so they know what they're pasting if they want to alter variables like speed or jump height or things of that nature.

Score: 5

"Un parte fue comica"

submission: Ra-kun leva's polka

date: February 9, 2009

La contadora se llama "LLEVA'S POLKA".
La animacion puede haber sido mas alijado con mejores graficos. El chiste no estuvo malo, pero tampoco me lleno.
Case todos los que usar este pagina no leer en espanol, debe buscar un amigo que pueda traducis por usted.