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Just some criticisms

I'm only trying to offer constructive criticism and in no way am I trying to insult you or bash your series.
In the passed I wrote some reviews for these series which were less than nice.

If you want to be a comedy writer you need to practice more than just vulgarity. I felt you used it as a clutch through most of it, if not all of it. Don't get me wrong, you had a lot of things worth smiling at; mostly the beginning of the picture show but the obsenities and sex themes got boring quick.
You've got non-sequitor down.
The biggest problem is the plot. I couldn't find it. I know it's three parts long, but gar; I just can't do it, I can't sit through another. Is it just three kids day at school?
On the other hand:
The animation isn't professional, but the amount of work that went into it is obvious. The backgrounds weren't bad, not bad at all, and there's definately attention to detail. I'm mostly criticizing your humor.
I know your general response is "You need a sense of humor!!..." but I don't think thats it. It's just a lot of swearing with sex jokes.
But it's not all bad.

JunkYardAnimations responds:

thank you thank you i appreciate the constructive criticism BUT you need to watch all 3 parts because this is 1 episode, you cant judge an episode if you just watch the first third because theres no climax, storyline or action yet... it was too big to upload as 1 full episode and im really disappointed because people think that Part 1 is the episode but its not even close, please if u have the time watch the other 2 parts! Part 3 is rated 4.3/5 and has ALL great reviews :)

Closure is important

If you had added just like 10 extra seconds of the guy doing an epic dino-finisher this could have been a masterpiece.
Good work though; just needs closure.
Felt like it finished too soon and left me with mouth agape.
GJ mate, GJ.

peixeaquatico responds:

thanks

I can't rate your film here

I didn't watch your film so I'm not giving it a score. 5/10 is just in between. Pls fix your play button, for whatever reason I can't right click and play it.

Tagger54 responds:

the play button works fine, I'm not sure why your having problems.

The dialogue

The dialogue was actually funny so learn to animate and make that story come truez.
Team up with someone and make a flash.

Heil responds:

i no how 2 animate

For what you're making it for...

Preloader was cool and the animation could be more detailed. Your menu was meh, unappealing.
Don't submit rubbish like this; ESPECIALLY when you're asking people, "..should I continue this?"
It's like your fishing for compliments. Submit stuff like this to spam sites or deviant art. That's where you get your criticisms.

evolvd-studios responds:

did u read the review? I said clearly RATE the preloader and menu intro. I know it was short. I started it today and wanted to see how it was going

That was rude of you

You make me think there's gonna be some decent animation and maybe some college humor might come in but no. You tricked me into watching like a half hour long craptastic fake flash movie in a flash movie and the final joke wasn't worth it! Shorten up the crappy one and lengthen out the good one...don't be lazy and just say I'm done...
Very rude sir, very rude.

RandomFilms responds:

Did you miss the part where I wrote "PLEASE READ FIRST!!!" and a whole paragraph saying it's not going to be that great? Or in the second paragraph where I said it's a class project not a real episode? Or how about in the third where I indicated it's not going to make sense?

Maybe I should have the title read "please read author comment's first so you won't be tricked into a cartoon about something that is vaguely different from the title"

And yes, this response is very rude

That was brilliant!

I'm still chuckling. I love the way you put that seriousness into it. A satire on dying to a goomba; BRILLIANT!

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

This makes me feel happy.

I watched all the way through and...

I can't give you a zero for the amount of work and time I'm assuming you spent on this. But the jokes were terrible. I think the only joke I liked was the last one about they're extra marks. Other than that it was just one long poor sound quality flash, and it's enormous...26.6MB?

JunkYardAnimations responds:

haha i have no idea how it turned out to be 26.6MB, i'm obviously doing something wrong, even my shorter flashes end up big. anways sorry u didnt find it funny at all, and thanks for calling the jokes terrible :)

Not Great (because you're a novice)

The 3D animation and "complex" tweens were decent. As for a flash I dropped your score to a 5. The non-3D aspects of the flash didn't look like they were a finished product and if they were I don't mean to insult.
If they weren't though I don't think you should submit anything that is 1/2 done. It doesn't really benefit anyone especially yourself. For pre-submission reviews ask friends and family. They'll usually be the 2nd most honest people.
Keep practicing and submit something you'd consider a finished product.

Mariofan9 responds:

Thank you.
I really tried to present it well, so yeah ... I don't upload unfinished projects here since that is frowned upon. It was supposed to be a finished project.

Allow me to review your review. It's a good review, but you need to be clear before you knock off 50 % of the score; all you can state is that the non-3d parts don't look like a finished product, without any reason. I feel like I'm being treated slightly unfairly because of this.

No sir. I didn't like it.

You look like you really wanted to do this but you got tired of it half way through so you threw in some really crappy Bush joke so you could submit it and get feed back.
I don't know much about either game but you look like knew a bit about both to animate whatever you animated there; so at least you had that down. The voice acting isn't a problem; I don't know how you would get someone to sound jus tlike sephiroth or whomever.
Good attempt mate, don't know how you made front page but props to ya for that'll.

fadedshadow responds:

okay

I prefer frame by frame animation over motion tweens because of the artistic feel. Then again you can't be great with out using all your tools.

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